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Model: Melody

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Like: Melody's pose is fantastic, with the way the top of the dress hangs off her breasts, and the right arm wrapping around the seat. It's a very intimate image, with everything excentuating her face and mouth, which is the focal point for me.

Dislike: The lighting is too dull, a bit too muted in areas, especially Ms. Melody's face. The shadows of the hair strands on her face look great, but a more direct light source feels necessary to me.
:icondivine-right:
Thanks. I have a normal color and a monochrome version of this too and couldn't decide which to upload but eventually I went with the desaturated color. I'm glad you like it.
:icondivine-right:
Thanks for the praise and the criticism, I do appreciate it. I was actually kind of trying to give it a muted look to match her expression. That's why the color is so subdued. I tried bumping up the shadows and highlights but it didn't look right, it lost too much detail. The glare off her dress under the studio lights was blinding.
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I think you picked right

Details

November 25, 2007
4.0 MB
70.6 KB
600×900

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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
1/25 second
F/3.5
28 mm
200
Nov 17, 2007, 3:49:33 AM

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